Trees

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patrick traveler
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Trees

Post by patrick traveler » September 24th, 2011, 6:40 pm

The trees conspire in company
to cut the power to our house
for there is something in the woods
that hates electric wire
and trees have reason, certainly
to fear the reach of our desire.

The firs that circle round our place
seem confounded by the glare.
Our floodlights float a misty scrim
that dulls the ancient sky,
and when the power died tonight
I thought I heard a sigh.

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dadio
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Re: Trees

Post by dadio » September 25th, 2011, 2:52 am

Very good, Patrick.

saw
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Re: Trees

Post by saw » September 25th, 2011, 8:56 am

terrific poem........man and nature .....the inevitable connections.....well done
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

Kailashana
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Re: Trees

Post by Kailashana » September 25th, 2011, 9:10 am

Nice poem.

:D

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Re: Trees

Post by Poetsden » November 11th, 2011, 4:27 am

Nice piece

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