white fields

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the mingo
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white fields

Post by the mingo » November 18th, 2011, 1:55 pm

white fields stretch away
into distance where a man
& his machine digs into the earth
farther off in time & place
another man sings
simultaneous with all this
a gas bubble is negotiating my lower intestine

you know what happens next
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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dadio
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Re: white fields

Post by dadio » November 19th, 2011, 3:10 pm

8) :)
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Re: white fields

Post by Arcadia » November 19th, 2011, 6:24 pm

:lol: ... well, it´s your bussiness...! :wink:
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Re: white fields

Post by the mingo » November 19th, 2011, 9:16 pm

Thx folks. 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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