Zzzzzaaaapppppppp!

[Vincy]

Bite marks
all over
her lower
lip
a slip
of the tongue
and cheek
stiff upper lip
She was hurting!
He too was hurting
in his own
different ways..
His anger hurting him
driving him to
temper tantrums
and shivers of rage
like a beast
in a cage.
When they met
they were hurting
together
for a while
till
the collective pain
grew louder
and louder!
and louder!!!!
Breaking hearts
shattering nerves
exploding minds
with hysteric gestures
and pathetic attitudes
till
they decayed
in and out
of
each other.
What had transpired
was a macabre fusion
a psychic transmutation
of body, aura, mind
never mind the evidence
the undeniably
disturbing
story of
two seperate
entities
acting out
the same will
Zzzzzzzzzzaaaaaaaaappppp!!.

[judih]

the image threw me into a parallel world
piece that surely must describe a network of lovers

[dadio]

Dark but well done.

[stilltrucking]

and the will of God was done

an amazing concept and creation

thy will be done
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
sorry vincy
it don't mean nothing, just goofin with the inspiration
just ah random responce to "the psychic transmutation" of the energy inspired by your poem
sometimes I think I am
A wantabe neuro-theologian.

thanks for the poem you zapped me right between the Eyes with it.

[Vincy]

One sleepless night, paper thin walls, they were the neighbors, this poem came out. I made a performance piece out of this poem with few others of this genre, I went bananas acting it out, yelling and screaming and ranting, I was surprised how many people identified. It is awkward and very dark but I have humor alongside, which cools the heat, no sweat. I call it 'poetry of the absurd'.

[stilltrucking]

the thin wall of absurdity that seperates one universe from another universe

some other universe where it all makes sense

I just liked the bit about seperate entities acting out the same will
I liked it a lot

thanks again
I will stop hectoring you now with these tangential replies of mine