GRANDDAD AND JEAN HARLOW.

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GRANDDAD AND JEAN HARLOW.

Post by dadio » January 23rd, 2012, 4:07 pm

Granddad said he saw
Jean Harlow once
While making deliveries

to the studio lot
and there she was
he said

real hot
just there
and looking my way

and I was struck dumb
my lips stiffened
my eyes were glued

and as she walked by
there was that glint
of unhappiness

that caught my eye
and I wanted
to reach out

a hand and touch
the goddess
of my dreams

but then she was gone
and the delivery made
I made my way

out of the lot
the truck heading
for the gates

the whole panoramic view
behind me
and she

Jean Harlow
back there somewhere
waiting for the next shot

and there was me
leaving that slice
of hell or heaven

the fantasy lot
and Granddad
sitting by the fire

his gaze elsewhere
maybe thinking
of Harlow

just beyond
his sad stare
some where.
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Re: GRANDDAD AND JEAN HARLOW.

Post by saw » January 25th, 2012, 5:28 pm

this one has a lot to say, in my mind, about the pull of celebrity and fame, as we deal with our perhaps unglamorous lives......the " glint of unhappiness" is a great way to remind us that it may not be as wonderful as we might imagine....fine work
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Re: GRANDDAD AND JEAN HARLOW.

Post by dadio » January 26th, 2012, 2:27 am

Thank you, Saw.

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