BEFORE YOU.

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dadio
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BEFORE YOU.

Post by dadio » February 8th, 2012, 3:53 am

Supposing Death
to be a woman

what then?
She asked

would you embrace it
as willingly as you do me?

The afternoon sun
seemed to hang

in the sky
like a child’s balloon

as you lay that day
in the tall grass

maybe
you said

if it had eyes
and a smile like yours

and she pulled
a stem of grass

and placed between lips
and stared above

as birds flew
to and fro

and would you go
willingly into the dark

as you do with me
into this tall grass?

You turned to face her
taking in

her blue eyes
and cheeks

maybe
if it allowed me

to kiss as good
as you do

and as long
and she turned over

took out
the stem of grass

and kissed your lips
welcome to Miss Death

she said
and you both laughed

and lay back
gazing at the summer sky

a deep blue
not knowing then

death would come for her
long before

it would ever
come for you.
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Re: BEFORE YOU.

Post by saw » February 8th, 2012, 9:42 am

sweet sadness, terry.......that the conversations bring to boil........very nice poem
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: BEFORE YOU.

Post by dadio » February 8th, 2012, 4:04 pm

Thank you, Saw.

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Re: BEFORE YOU.

Post by the mingo » February 9th, 2012, 12:02 pm

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: BEFORE YOU.

Post by dadio » February 10th, 2012, 2:14 am

:D Thank you.

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