After lessons at junior school
coming down the bricks stairs
Helen said
can I walk home with you?
Sure
you replied
and she set off with you
along St George’s Road
the traffic and smoke fumes
setting the scene
she in her school frock
and cardigan
and white ankle socks
beside you in your grey jacket
and grey short trousers
and she said
I don’t usually walk home alone
but mum said I can walk home
with you save her coming along
to the school with the other kids
and pram with baby
you took in
her two plaits of hair
and thin framed glasses
with large lens
which made her eyes
larger than they were
her small hands
by her side
a small school bag
over her shoulder
and did you know
Janice likes you?
Her grandmother
told my mother
the other day
after school
but I like you better
do you like me?
she asked
you noticed
she had small white teeth
with a thin brace
along the top
sure I do
you replied
I like Janice too
but you I like more
and she smiled
and put her right hand
in yours and squeezed it
and you smiled
but hoped none
of the other boys around
noticed the hand holding
after all a tough boy
has a reputation to maintain
and as you squeezed
her hand back
clouds darkened
and it started
to piss with rain.
AFTER SCHOOL WALK.
AFTER SCHOOL WALK.
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Re: AFTER SCHOOL WALK.
a sweet innocence permeates, as most should be able to recall a similar moment from school as we all tried to figure out how it all worked......enjoyed
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
you may end up where you are heading
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Re: AFTER SCHOOL WALK.
how old is junior high in England? Trying to relate across the cultures.
Here it used to be about twelve or thirteen. Used be sixty years ago no idea what it is now.
on a personal note
I was such a doofus in junior high, I never made the connection between the girl in my homeroom class with the pretty face and tight fitting straight skirt and my tented pants. I was just
thank you for the poem and the flash back.
Here it used to be about twelve or thirteen. Used be sixty years ago no idea what it is now.
on a personal note
I was such a doofus in junior high, I never made the connection between the girl in my homeroom class with the pretty face and tight fitting straight skirt and my tented pants. I was just

thank you for the poem and the flash back.

Re: AFTER SCHOOL WALK.
Thank you, the mingo 

Re: AFTER SCHOOL WALK.
Hi stilltrucking,
back in 1950s in England it was 5-11 years old. The poems is set circa 1955 when I saw 7/8. I never saw girls then as related to sex or such but probably something of their gentleness or softness copmared to the boys who were usually neither.
Thank you for reading the poem & commenting.
back in 1950s in England it was 5-11 years old. The poems is set circa 1955 when I saw 7/8. I never saw girls then as related to sex or such but probably something of their gentleness or softness copmared to the boys who were usually neither.
Thank you for reading the poem & commenting.

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