big kazilla finger

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the mingo
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big kazilla finger

Post by the mingo » April 28th, 2012, 11:41 am

the big kazilla finger pokes around toward the tree -
requires no advertising or aunt mary graham cracker appropriations
or sending the poor outwards to the frontiers
45.2 times 'til all the indians have either moved or died
allowing the turn of the whole place into
taxable real estate
go medieval and give us
a king because fear talk centers around
protected versus unprotected power sources
really, these guys could die
all alone out there
millions of miles from home
whistling dixie jews in
a dry & arid place
Moses on Mars
a contemporary classic
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: big kazilla finger

Post by dadio » April 29th, 2012, 2:46 am

8) Liked this.

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Re: big kazilla finger

Post by constantine » May 5th, 2012, 2:17 pm

the finger has to go - that much should be obvious. inventive language that lays it out plain without being plain in the usual politically poetic way.

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Re: big kazilla finger

Post by judih » May 5th, 2012, 10:06 pm

Moses on Mars
water to part
or not to part

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Re: big kazilla finger

Post by the mingo » May 7th, 2012, 3:47 pm

Thx guys 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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