who done killed my son

[sonofthesun]

Was it them?
Or was it you?
It's hard to say these days.
When money's done owned everything,
and each piece of land 's been taken
raped and pillaged and then
for pretends sake
"sold" again
for fucks sake
who are they foolin
who are the fools
no one else
but me and you
sick on vitamins
and the goodness they're selling
all hopped up on pretend
sold to you as well being
a necessity to live
within this make believe we call home
yeah get on that road
its been paved
but it doesn't lead anywhere
as its been made smooth
upon the backs of countless kid's dreams
it may seem like your goin places
but you've done shackled yourself
to what you've been told you must have


first draft...need to make it more succinct

[creativesoul]

work in progress- nice-aloha