IN THE SWIMMING POOL IN THE PARK.

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dadio
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IN THE SWIMMING POOL IN THE PARK.

Post by dadio » May 11th, 2012, 2:38 am

Your sister called her
the girl in the red beret

and there she was
in the outdoor

swimming pool
in the park

her gran sitting
in the stands knitting

and Janice saw you
and said

Fancy seeing you here
can you swim?

You stood
in the shallow end

of the pool
in your blue trunks

looking at her wet fair hair
clinging to her body

and her eyes bright
in the sun’s afternoon light

No not so far
you replied

I can
she said shaking water

from her hair and head
I can swim the length

and back almost
you looked over

at Jimmy in the pool
talking to friends

she touched your hand
and said

I can show you
how to swim

and she smiled
and you felt her hand

on yours and hoped
Jimmy wasn’t looking

seeing her touch you
Maybe another time

you said
pulling your hand away

and plunging it
into the water

I’ve got to go
you said

my friends
are waiting for me

and she looked at you
her eyes now sad

and she said softly
No stay with me

I like it
when you are near me

and she stood there
in her pink swimsuit

her hair sticking
to her face

her eyes watery and blue
and gazing hopefully

(the noise and laughter
from the pool

momentarily shut off)
at seven year old you.
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Re: IN THE SWIMMING POOL IN THE PARK.

Post by stilltrucking » May 12th, 2012, 7:57 pm

thanks for the insight into an almost forgotten childhood.

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Re: IN THE SWIMMING POOL IN THE PARK.

Post by dadio » May 13th, 2012, 2:45 am

you are more than welcome and thank you for being there, stilltrucking. 8)

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