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creativesoul
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Post by creativesoul » May 22nd, 2012, 3:47 am

i was walking down the road today
baby pig following me
running by the dogs
he was really grateful
he went to live with my friend
the wonderful daughter
that says' my dad says he is a scrub' i laugh --
that pig really needed help
had a bite on his ear
that is a good family
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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the mingo
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Post by the mingo » May 22nd, 2012, 8:15 am

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by saw » May 22nd, 2012, 9:46 am

well done....never turn down a trailing pig.... I always say
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by creativesoul » May 22nd, 2012, 2:30 pm

i looked at him and said' you are the only friend i have that is honest about what you are' lol :mrgreen:
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by dadio » May 23rd, 2012, 2:21 am

Love the them and poem. 8) 8)

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Post by Arcadia » May 23rd, 2012, 6:58 pm

I got lost with the story but I could experience the path very well ... :lol: gracias, creativesoul!!!!

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