LAUNDRY

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creativesoul
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LAUNDRY

Post by creativesoul » May 16th, 2012, 7:25 pm

the best thing about this time lapse
from one world to another
water and sunlight and sand
plenty of sand
actual over-abundance of sand
in z car
in eyes
car
board
every where- cept there
i want to surf
all day every day
yep
laundry masquerades as actual work-
when the sun isnt so high in the sky
im going to do it again
surf]stand up paddle walk-the beach
swim
listen here
i told you
this is not cbgeebees in new york city
this is not hollywood or LA
if you want to wear high heels in kauai
blessings
kinda like'do as the romans do' but dunno some of these folks
want beverly hills in hanalei
the prices are about the same
leave the attitude at the bridge
another kind of cleaning
is to imagine
all the things you ever felt on a clothes line and one by one the wind comes up
release
the clothes pins
they fly away
all the color and costume
all that flare and desire
will fill you later on
sweetness of love is inside you
let us clean the places in our hearts that were so lonely and lost
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by the mingo » May 17th, 2012, 8:26 am

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: LAUNDRY

Post by saw » May 18th, 2012, 10:38 am

a real pleasure to read jana......I've always like your raw brutal honesty that you are able to poeticize .....(that's probably not a word) but maybe it should be

maybe we need a candidate whose slogan is Don't Politicize...Poeticize !
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by creativesoul » May 18th, 2012, 2:57 pm

good morning- ah it is a 'leave your hat on day' as i wander towards the sea- i have not been swallowed by a whale'yet' lol-thanx -
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Post by creativesoul » May 23rd, 2012, 8:11 pm

after too many days on the sea, in the brightest of sun light and wind
laundry is all around=
cooking on land with sea legs is always a challenge\
after salt and seas
peaceful journeys
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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