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creativesoul
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Post by creativesoul » June 3rd, 2012, 3:25 pm

the way it comes to me'
is like the tree
having roots, seasons, timelessness
leaves falling on the spot
she had loved the hardest
waiting
she knew
he was still angry
that things had gone this way
how could i heal that?

i know he knows i love him still
just couldnt quite make it up the hill

miss you, kiss you- want you
but today i just have to speak to the seas
because i could never seem to please
let go of all those fleas
that dog is sleeping

women are weeping
that dream of love
floats like a turtle

surrounded by a shell
that contorts the bang
of all that slang
rolling of that tongue
where is the fun

they tell me if you arent having fun
you arent doing it right

i learned to have fun
a serious child
introspective and self centered
he was like me

certainly
we had some hot moments

i know he loves me too=
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: now

Post by saw » June 6th, 2012, 9:22 am

beautiful little poem jana, full of musical sounds, and the passion of young love that had taken a turn at some point.......and now .........is just a warm memory
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: now

Post by the mingo » June 6th, 2012, 11:30 am

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by creativesoul » June 6th, 2012, 1:09 pm

oui bon jour- this is the passion of a young woman- beautiful- thanx for the feed back- aloha 8)
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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