breathe (slightly different)

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justwalt
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breathe (slightly different)

Post by justwalt » October 15th, 2012, 4:20 pm


reality must be of thought,
so intense as to include
even birth and death,
or suns and moons...
with ease I suppose,
but what does supposing,
propose ?

no thought may last forever,
but they last long enough,
and there doesn't have to be
any answers... at all,
a cat will sit, until it is done sitting,
presumably ?

the energy, in and of it,
like the light of day, just is...
and the endless rivers smell of blood,
my body, the heart of earth and yours,
breathe in the seeds of thought,
and exhales tomorrow's dream,
a give-away, into its own meaning

no guarantee is my satisfaction,
as it beats from head to feet,
a million miles or a million years,
suffice it not a sacrificial jest,
a million thoughts to come and go,
as memories... eternally expressed

imagination... rests in the season,
and encamps along our war-torn shore,
senses in the breeze, persuasions stray,
and pulls the veil from the door,
a secret revealed, a sacred space,
a circle of life, and a cycle of lies...
thoughtfully disguised

I could have been a tree, so happily,
and it doesn't need to matter how,
thoughts do not need to know...
willful thinking sings high above
any casualty of freedoms voice,
with no want of choice

wgs/10/12


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Re: breathe

Post by dadio » October 16th, 2012, 2:34 am

a GOOD PHILOSOPHICAL POEM 8)

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Re: breathe (slightly different)

Post by jackofnightmares » October 16th, 2012, 11:36 am

hunter s thompson's last thoughts and the brides of jesus
nothing to do with nothing liked the poem a lot
very philosophical 8)
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Re: breathe (slightly different)

Post by justwalt » October 16th, 2012, 4:52 pm

it is that it is,
thank you and it

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