in prime

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the mingo
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in prime

Post by the mingo » January 15th, 2013, 11:38 am

what about if I woke up some morning and
decided to define your derivation?
or frog your blinker?
i could be distributive - an established exporter,
my large ears holding your scent close
we could go down that road
pre-proto-indo-european all the way
or gospel of john style
with plenty thunder of big spirit sha-na-na-na
our external & internal psychologies
operating in-sync independently
expansively locked in
& hearts beating in prime
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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stilltrucking
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Re: in prime

Post by stilltrucking » January 15th, 2013, 4:21 pm

sweet 8)

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dadio
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Re: in prime

Post by dadio » January 16th, 2013, 4:04 am

Good capture. 8)

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