The screams of the women
brought us rushing
from the house;
but it was all over,
just the toddlers shoe
tumbling toe over heel,
toe over heel.
in turbulence
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Re: in turbulence
good capture
a hell of a poem
thanks for the excellent poem
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first thoughts second thoughts
I my first thought was bloody hell but i thought that sounded like I was trying to patronize you
a hell of a poem
thanks for the excellent poem
>>>
first thoughts second thoughts
I my first thought was bloody hell but i thought that sounded like I was trying to patronize you
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"I want to create wilderness out of empire."
-Gary Snyder
Free Rice
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I am not a veteran of the South East Asian War Games
http://www.landscaper.net/short.htm
Re: in turbulence
I think I have been there. Good poem, David.
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