taste of the ceremony

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creativesoul
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taste of the ceremony

Post by creativesoul » March 3rd, 2013, 6:33 am

one of the best deaths
is when one thing threatens another

into almost extinction
mutating across oceans'
vast distances
blood streams airs of trickles
pump and stretch

that deflation brings back life
expanding across
whatever veils of distinction
got tossed overboard
nothing short of eternity
will do
moons orbit and colors
rack the bones
trace lifetimes of skinless treasures
floating above captivation , cultivation and slavery.
but this will last- after the body erases your clever
world
the soul will gather starlight
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reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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the mingo
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Re: taste of the ceremony

Post by the mingo » March 3rd, 2013, 11:10 am

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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dadio
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Re: taste of the ceremony

Post by dadio » March 9th, 2013, 5:37 am

Distinctive write; well done. 8)

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