deep within the bliss of amnesia

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saw
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deep within the bliss of amnesia

Post by saw » March 16th, 2013, 9:56 pm

I'd be happy to lie on the rooftop
contemplating the merits of apathy
vis a vis the pain of awareness
for hours on end, staring down the night
to see who blinked first

I'd be happy swimming with the starfish
tossed back and forth like a beach ball
by my adopted family of dolphins,
the torpedoes of never-ending war
a long forgotten recollection

Hell, i'd be happy forgetting who I am tonight
left only with my childish dreams
that still might come true,
I'd be happy tonight to demonstrate to you
some of my non-verbal communication
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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dadio
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Re: deep within the bliss of amnesia

Post by dadio » March 17th, 2013, 4:46 pm

Enjoyable poem. 8)

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stilltrucking
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Re: deep within the bliss of amnesia

Post by stilltrucking » March 18th, 2013, 10:40 am

your poem is so cool 8)
it made me happy to read it :D

thank you

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Re: deep within the bliss of amnesia

Post by creativesoul » March 18th, 2013, 11:59 am

sometimes the quiet helps demonstrate the secrets of our souls :D NICE-------WRITE SUGAR :oops:
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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