reason for the vessel

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the mingo
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reason for the vessel

Post by the mingo » September 9th, 2013, 10:09 am

the reason for the vessel
is violent requests
and the reaction
is verse
lets go far away
we'll live up on the roof
with all our instruments
the knowledge of kiss
& the knife of language
where the journey will sit
as our judge & the very last word
as the door clicks shut
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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saw
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Re: reason for the vessel

Post by saw » September 9th, 2013, 11:45 am

really like

the knowledge of a kiss
& the knife of language

two exquisite lines together
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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Re: reason for the vessel

Post by dadio » September 11th, 2013, 5:15 am

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