elysium fields of greatness

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saw
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elysium fields of greatness

Post by saw » September 16th, 2013, 9:11 am

what if I were permanently nice
no matter what you did to me
what if i just grinned like I knew something
that you didn't, from ear to other ear

but of course no one can smile that wide
so you tell me I like to exaggerate my points
and I say that's impossible, I have no points
my score is zero, for I'm a bush league wannabe

zero I tell you, you've been trouncing my ass for years
at least in your mind, and that's what's important
that place where you tabulate your fantasy baseball teams,
funny ain't it.... how you keep throwing those shut-outs

one after another
in that elysium field
between your ears, hell ....
those records will never be broken
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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constantine
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Re: elysium fields of greatness

Post by constantine » September 16th, 2013, 3:25 pm

heheh! that's telling her, brother saw. ain't nothing but an ass trouncer with a nasty curve.

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dadio
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Re: elysium fields of greatness

Post by dadio » September 17th, 2013, 2:05 am

Well done 8)

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