the waiting morning

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sweetwater
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the waiting morning

Post by sweetwater » September 17th, 2013, 7:57 am

very early in the morning
motivated by the positive thought
of yet another day

of what the day may become

i wait ...

still very early in the morning
motivated by the negative realization
that my coffee is now empty

and what the day may become

i wait ...

saw
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Re: the waiting morning

Post by saw » September 19th, 2013, 9:15 am

staying positive is hard work...takes determination.....we are all of course on different places on the medicine wheel....sometimes there is plenty of good all around us, and we just miss it by focusing on this one dumb ass problem we have.....succinct poem
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: the waiting morning

Post by dadio » September 19th, 2013, 9:55 am

You are the existential poet of all existentialists. 8)

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