Bang Bang ~ you're Full

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mtmynd
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Bang Bang ~ you're Full

Post by mtmynd » October 6th, 2013, 6:56 pm

Bang Bang ~ you're Full

stretched out
over words
scraping
ideas deep
into flesh
that begs
for touch
the sonnet
was useless
in times
like this

full moons
deserved
so much
better
than the
remnants
offered
thru the
pigeons
delicate coo

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dadio
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Re: Bang Bang ~ you're Full

Post by dadio » October 7th, 2013, 2:49 am

Bang on. Fine poem.
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the mingo
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Re: Bang Bang ~ you're Full

Post by the mingo » October 7th, 2013, 10:40 am

8) yeah - & Mongolia too
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tarbaby
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Re: Bang Bang ~ you're Full

Post by tarbaby » October 7th, 2013, 10:47 am

that's the skinny :D
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Re: Bang Bang ~ you're Full

Post by mtmynd » October 9th, 2013, 2:14 am

gracias, gentlemen, for the kind words! ;)
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