wind chimes

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saw
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wind chimes

Post by saw » October 6th, 2013, 12:53 pm

the metal chimes in the sky lounge
dance like tribal warriors pounding their feet in the wind
the Bamboo Boys lay down the drumbeat
while The Glass Sisters sing a melody so sweet

it sparkles like Motown,
like those oft-forgotten backup singers
those bop shoo boppers, those la la la girls
no different than Amati or Stradivarius

always hangin' in the background
makin' any old lead singer sound marvelous
the seductive coos of undulating lovebirds
so exquisite my brain had to split in two

just to write this little ode
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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the mingo
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Re: wind chimes

Post by the mingo » October 7th, 2013, 10:46 am

Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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dadio
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Re: wind chimes

Post by dadio » October 9th, 2013, 2:33 am

Splendidly done. 8)

saw
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Re: wind chimes

Post by saw » October 12th, 2013, 10:14 am

thanx dadio.....and cool video mr. mingo
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: wind chimes

Post by creativesoul » October 12th, 2013, 1:08 pm

awesome-
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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