it's all relative

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saw
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it's all relative

Post by saw » November 2nd, 2013, 4:30 pm

how do I get close to you
and have you not believe
that it really should be this way
instead of that

there is no love present in possession
that paradigm is merely imposing muscularity
but isn't there something in between
dominatrix and neo-slave

isnt there a lavish garden
with peer-like flowers of all species
an open glen where grasses wave confidently
in coupled majesty

isn't there a place
where you are only you
and I am just myself,
and that is perfectly fine
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

mtmynd
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Re: it's all relative

Post by mtmynd » November 3rd, 2013, 1:27 am

saw wrote: isn't there a place
where you are only you
and I am just myself,
and that is perfectly fine
the moment you realize the answer to this question, your smile will obliterate the other questions you've asked.

heartfelt expressions make good reading. thx, saw.
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dadio
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Re: it's all relative

Post by dadio » November 7th, 2013, 11:50 am

Self discovery, knowing who we are and maybe why, that is our journey, that is part of who and what we are. Love when or if it comes is the undertanding and acceptance of that on both sides...Darn good poem,,, 8)

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