I like my other brain better

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saw
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I like my other brain better

Post by saw » November 9th, 2013, 10:26 am

sure, sure
my analytic brain is okay
it had its purpose and place I guess
but what a fucking bully

so practical
so ridiculously sensible
dig this....it thinks i should mop
and vacuum

what an idiot !
tell me my friends
what moron on his deathbed
ever says

I only have one regret in my long life,
i wish that i had kept a cleaner house
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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the mingo
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Re: I like my other brain better

Post by the mingo » November 9th, 2013, 12:06 pm

crack me up! Ha! 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: I like my other brain better

Post by dadio » November 10th, 2013, 4:08 am

Made my day kind of poem. 8)
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Re: I like my other brain better

Post by mtmynd » November 12th, 2013, 1:49 pm

mind and the memory challenging the soul,
which is the boss that will set one free ?

excellent piece, saw... gracias.
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Re: I like my other brain better

Post by creativesoul » November 12th, 2013, 2:55 pm

sweet
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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