IN DARK DREAMS.

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dadio
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IN DARK DREAMS.

Post by dadio » February 16th, 2014, 4:13 am

In dark dreams
I walk again
those empty
hospital corridors

with their dull lights
and smell of disinfect
and death
in those dreams

I look for you again
my son
passing by
the blanks faces

of others
looking at
their eyes
for glimpses of life

or concern
or such
as humans
sometimes have

I go by
room after room
pass porters
pushing

the occasional trolley
by the various
side wards
passing by

the bright lights
of hospital shops
in the dream
I am hoping

to find you once more
sitting there
on the bed
your back turned

your head lowered
but this time
I am hoping
for a healthier you

my son
not one so ill
so lost
in this dream

sunlight shines
through the window
of the small ward
a bird sings

not that dull curtain
the murmur
of voices
the usual limbo like

air about the place
this time my son
I wish to find you well
looking at me

with your own
familiar smile
not that haunted
expression

and tired eyes
that draw from me
a steam
of deep felt cries.
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sonofthesun
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Re: IN DARK DREAMS.

Post by sonofthesun » February 16th, 2014, 4:48 am

The light shines through. A heartfelt poem I admire.
There is no empty space

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Re: IN DARK DREAMS.

Post by creativesoul » February 17th, 2014, 6:44 pm

beauiful-ly done
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: IN DARK DREAMS.

Post by jackofnightmares » February 18th, 2014, 6:31 pm

Good capture. :cry:
I am grateful for your poetry.
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dadio
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Re: IN DARK DREAMS.

Post by dadio » February 24th, 2014, 4:24 pm

Thank you all.

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