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sonofthesun
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composition

Post by sonofthesun » May 11th, 2014, 1:40 am

the thought comes unbidden
the world is gigantic
the wind blows in
connecting me to it
a cat lies in my path
and my dog goes for it
what is the chance for that moment
as my neighbor comes out to share in this connection
is their meaning
or just haphazard meanderings
does it go deep
or is it all just things
apart but not
just changing composition
flowing to the next happenstance
entropy at its finest
There is no empty space

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dadio
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Re: composition

Post by dadio » May 11th, 2014, 2:00 am

Photographic in its snapshot cpature. 8)

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Re: composition

Post by creativesoul » May 17th, 2014, 11:23 pm

hp -hazzard- i like that- deep- and somewhere in between- :mrgreen:
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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