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creativesoul
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all at once

Post by creativesoul » June 4th, 2014, 3:07 pm

im working on my evolution
maybe the tranformation has begun
all those caterpillars rolling
down the driveway
like troops

now they have made amazing butterflies
mariposas
the horns are blowing
they go to an off road back house
smoke weed and listen to a band
that heals their souls
then they drive home in the moonlight
kindness and laughter

but ya know
there are some things that if you dont do it
right away
you may never
however clever
if you are not dying to take your clothes off
dont do it
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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dadio
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Re: all at once

Post by dadio » June 6th, 2014, 1:44 am

Insightful poem. Classic

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justwalt
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Re: all at once

Post by justwalt » June 7th, 2014, 5:15 pm

amazing butterflies...

w
many is a word

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