Always Low Prices-ALWAYS

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sVentos cruSh
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Always Low Prices-ALWAYS

Post by sVentos cruSh » March 29th, 2005, 11:59 pm

Walking, homeless and all alone
at three am, temperature
low: thirty-two degrees; automatic doors hesitate upon

my entrance-colliding with the glass
always! Four quarters
ring from my pocket into the
till; the price for

a shit-brick piece of Hershey, Pennsylvania made with
love (and almonds): ninety-three cents
(without tax!)
alas!--No change;
yesterday was the
same, tomorrow will be too...
:wink: ALWAYS
seven toes crushed

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Post by e_dog » March 30th, 2005, 6:35 pm

this is an excellent piece.

welcome aboard.
I don't think 'Therefore, I am.' Therefore, I am.

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