FEW HOURS IN ROUEN.

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dadio
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FEW HOURS IN ROUEN.

Post by dadio » July 15th, 2014, 1:45 am

We paused
for a few hours
at Rouen
and got off the coach

and the guide said
have a look round for a while
but don't get back late
we got a long way to go yet

so I wandered off with Miriam
to see a few sights
she said she was feeling
tired and hungry

and so we took in a café
and had a coffee and cake
and then went
to Rouen Cathedral

and had look round
can't see the point
of these places
she said

no one believes any more
you know that's not true
by saying no one believes
any more

many people believe
but they don't make
a big deal of it
I said

these places
have a beauty
apart from whatever
religious attraction

they may have
she wasn't impressed
and we didn't stay long
and walking back to the coach

she said
the whole religious thing
is a hangover
from the last century

I let her have her say
I liked her blue eyes
and red tight curled hair
and her way of walking

the hips moving
the tight tits
bobbing up and down
in her yellow top

do you believe then?
she asked
believe what?
all this God

and Heaven thing?
guess so
I said
but it's more like

a comfortable tee shirt
I like the feel of it
and it keeps me sane
in a mad world

we reached the coach
and got on
and sat together
on the right hand side

half way down
I can make you
feel comfortable and sane
she said

do you believe in me?
sure I do
she took my hand
and kissed it

and the driver
put on the radio
and a Beatles song
came on

and she leaned close to me
as the coach took off
out of Rouen
and I smelt her perfume

and her closeness
warmed me
and the world seemed
a little less mad

and her hand moved
between my thighs
and I was comfortable
and sanely glad.
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theirishsea
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Re: FEW HOURS IN ROUEN.

Post by theirishsea » July 15th, 2014, 3:27 am

I liked this poem. I don't know whether you were inspired by a real life experience or if the Bing pictures (Bing search engine) which was featured today did. Doesn't matter. Interesting poem.
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Re: FEW HOURS IN ROUEN.

Post by dadio » July 15th, 2014, 7:14 am

Thank you, Irish. Bit of each. 8)

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