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creativesoul
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bitch school

Post by creativesoul » August 11th, 2014, 6:21 pm

i have to chick up
go back to waxing everything -
the economy of being old and blind
and having to pay someone to fix it up
nothing i have tried makes me not smoke

convinced beyond anything logical that my smoke
is filled with my thoughts
that ride the smokes feathers to a place
where it is no longer my concern

moving to a sterile apartment
with dog washing facilities
in portlandia
im thinking that this is the best thing ever
a gym in the building'

a concierge
fuck me hard
life cannot get any better
or can it?
there is that sparkling man that
i want to buy
a chair from
there- and he is french
ahh and taller than i
i want to touch him
but my honor has been restored=
even if it came real hard
vacation from the marriage
every one is wearing leis
large flower print tee shirts and laughing loudly on the beaches
backbone in tact-infact; stronger then ever in my soul\

the hayfields melting in andrew wyath yellows
van gough sunflowers everywhere
i can believe this
bliss
that face- i just want to kiss
no matter- if- i just get another degree-but my family has been restored to me
although there was much
i wish i could have said
there really is more
that i could adore
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

saw
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Re: bitch school

Post by saw » August 12th, 2014, 6:09 am

nice ride...particularly like the ending

'although there was much
i wish i could have said
there really is more
that i could adore"

sublime
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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dadio
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Re: bitch school

Post by dadio » August 18th, 2014, 5:07 am

Well capture and told in your unique voice.

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