The Other Night

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68degrees
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The Other Night

Post by 68degrees » December 19th, 2014, 11:51 am

You were talking
from across the room;
I was listening, I swear,
but observed instead,
your right wrist extended,
holding that lovely hand

You could have been
speaking about dinner or
the unopened rye bread
on the white linen

Only our time lacks
understanding of what
this all might mean

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Re: The Other Night

Post by WIREMAN » December 19th, 2014, 7:20 pm

this is a beautiful thought provoking poem....i enjoyed immensely...thanks! 8)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: The Other Night

Post by 68degrees » December 20th, 2014, 12:00 am

Thank you. My wife says I don't write enough nice poems. I try to please her when I can ;)

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