day into night dream

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theirishsea
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day into night dream

Post by theirishsea » January 17th, 2015, 3:11 pm

my dreams drip
deep
deep
deep

dissolve in sleep
cheap weeping
in unreal night
the liquid sights
kaleidoscoping
like hot molasses
steaming
dreams
that will not last
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.
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Re: day into night dream

Post by WIREMAN » January 17th, 2015, 6:32 pm

10 minute dream are possible
i just had one on the snooze this morning
it was awesome......nice poem Dan
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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Re: day into night dream

Post by justwalt » January 17th, 2015, 11:39 pm

nice...
my dreams have moved
to the daylight hours
many is a word
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Re: day into night dream

Post by Doreen Peri » January 19th, 2015, 7:52 pm

Enjoyed this, Dan!
the liquid sights
kaleidoscoping
like hot molasses
steaming
dreams
that will not last
Excellent!
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