moonage revery

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moonage revery

Post by justwalt » January 24th, 2015, 3:05 am

cold moon, in wholeness rising, yet in blood shall you fall,
torn from the ages of silence, shaken at the break of dawn,
shadow chasers dance, for the chance to answer the call,
aroused, aries awakens, but gives his fate a sullen yawn,

bounty in the seventh house, the garden gates are opened,
a second omen takes flight, across the night for all to view,
in these thin hours, starry eyes search for words unspoken,
lo, the harvest of time is ripe, to reunite the self... with you,

and third time charmers, the sun, the earth and the moon,
givers and takers of life and love, shapers of nature's design,
with venus, jupiter and mars, the heavens begin to attune,
and aries, beyond his traits, now actuates the hands of time,

exodus on the celestial horizon, time has breached its span,
the void rejoins the light, creation invited, into the unknown,
the tetrad is replete, as life's estate repeats the fall of man,
our plight, the rite of passage from flesh and blood, into bone

wgs/1/15
many is a word

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Re: moonage revery

Post by revolutionR » January 24th, 2015, 1:37 pm

Keep the moon in the middle of your mind's eye
only the heaven's know when its time to die
the moon will keep you clear, when it draws near. 8)

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Re: moonage revery

Post by WIREMAN » January 25th, 2015, 11:54 am

the moon....careful that u dont drown in its reflection like old Li Po.... :lol:
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: moonage revery

Post by justwalt » January 26th, 2015, 2:50 pm

thanks RR, but I'm third eye blind, not to say I
(see) it as a bad thing, eyes on the sur(prize)...

and thankx 2 u 2 wireman,
ol' Li Po, will have to look into him later...
this piece is about the blood moon tetrad that's
happening... lota buz about it in these days

thankx more
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Re: moonage revery

Post by whoaisme » January 26th, 2015, 6:43 pm

job well done, sir!

the first couple lines pulled me in and i stayed because of that, bravo, keep going!
"From the sudden invasion of a mind not my own in the world. This I will record. For whom? For m y s e l f, beyond denial and beyond indifference." - Philip Lamantia

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Re: moonage revery

Post by Doreen Peri » January 26th, 2015, 7:23 pm

Great to see you, Walt! ... been a long time. I really enjoyed this piece! You're a wordsmith...

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Re: moonage revery

Post by the mingo » January 26th, 2015, 7:41 pm

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: moonage revery

Post by justwalt » January 26th, 2015, 8:21 pm

whoaisme, many thanks to ya...
hopefully, the hook brings you back.

yes, greets D... I was stuck working again in the city...
for more than the past year, and non-stop since I came
home... september last... all for friends and family though,
but I need some me-time, and writing and posting here
sure helps in that sense... thanks

and mingo :wink: what is that avatar... I picture a wizeguy with
a tiny hat smoking a cigar... thanks too
many is a word

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Re: moonage revery

Post by sweetwater » January 27th, 2015, 10:41 am

seems initiatory
full of hoods and swords
and strange concoctions
of kool aid
and the mercurial
blend of bravery

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Re: moonage revery

Post by justwalt » January 27th, 2015, 11:47 am

an ancient clockwork at play,
signs in the stars, sun and moon
everything has something to say,
when time becomes opportune

thankx sweetwater
and yeah, the slight
eeriness helps

ps

I have a hooded cloak and sword...
(from a small film part of years ago)

tks
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