the massive low

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whoaisme
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the massive low

Post by whoaisme » February 6th, 2015, 4:32 am

many a world
i have fallen from
every word
of my grace,
said

slouch'd or suffering
immense.

the radio won't play
my song but stillness
as all the dance floors
of America
are approached at half staff
like the hands
of my grandmother
when she would make
a fist

like i was raised.

seldom is a world
i have yet to keep,
fallen
from grace
like drug store
cologne--

that which does not kill
me, adds flesh
and bone
to my "amen."
"From the sudden invasion of a mind not my own in the world. This I will record. For whom? For m y s e l f, beyond denial and beyond indifference." - Philip Lamantia

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Re: the massive low

Post by sweetwater » February 6th, 2015, 10:39 am

very good read
enjoyed
thankyou

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the mingo
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Re: the massive low

Post by the mingo » February 6th, 2015, 11:10 am

all hail flesh on the bone bone hell yes & amen - Mornin' Whoa!
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: the massive low

Post by whoaisme » February 6th, 2015, 2:33 pm

thanks for reading and for your comments 8)

top of the mornin right back atcha, mingo :D
"From the sudden invasion of a mind not my own in the world. This I will record. For whom? For m y s e l f, beyond denial and beyond indifference." - Philip Lamantia

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Re: the massive low

Post by revolutionR » February 6th, 2015, 2:56 pm

Very cool 8)

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