Irvine Park
Irvine Park
Rain falls
into our lives
like grace,
rinsing years
from folded hands
and damp prayers
Only folks who keep
secrets understand
they have been invited
to share in its serenity
into our lives
like grace,
rinsing years
from folded hands
and damp prayers
Only folks who keep
secrets understand
they have been invited
to share in its serenity
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Re: Irvine Park
i'd rather read:
"rinsing years
from folded hands
and damp prayers"
but i'm just splitting hairs, this is a good one! keep em coming 68
"rinsing years
from folded hands
and damp prayers"
but i'm just splitting hairs, this is a good one! keep em coming 68
"From the sudden invasion of a mind not my own in the world. This I will record. For whom? For m y s e l f, beyond denial and beyond indifference." - Philip Lamantia
Re: Irvine Park
whoa:
Yes. I can see that change. I don't mind splitting hairs, I just don't have many left![Wink ;)](./images/smilies/icon_wink.gif)
68degrees
Yes. I can see that change. I don't mind splitting hairs, I just don't have many left
![Wink ;)](./images/smilies/icon_wink.gif)
68degrees
Re: Irvine Park
do secrets breed serenity? I suppose if you are keeping secrets then someone shared them-- or are the secrets our own?
Re: Irvine Park
katydid:
Yes. But only when they remain secret. Once out, no.
Maybe. We probably have more personal secrets, than secrets between people, don't you think?
Thanks for looking here and asking.
68degrees
Yes. But only when they remain secret. Once out, no.
Maybe. We probably have more personal secrets, than secrets between people, don't you think?
Thanks for looking here and asking.
68degrees
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Re: Irvine Park
i appreciate this swish of a cleansing
the open invitation for catharsis
there for the taking
the open invitation for catharsis
there for the taking
Re: Irvine Park
"swish" is such a nice sounding word...almost a wish, but just that much more.
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