pounding up wordlessly

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pounding up wordlessly

Post by wylde » March 26th, 2015, 7:31 am

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i feel the scent in your eyes
tasting the words that they see
i taste the peace in your touch
hearing of the visions that will be
i smell the presence
of skin tightly talking
pounding up wordlessly

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Re: pounding up wordlessly

Post by saw » March 26th, 2015, 12:09 pm

simple and poignant, so exhilarating to imagine the senses, sensing more than they were designed for...like left side and right side brain than can switch if they really need to...there is so much more than verbal communication, but in this case I'm glad you decided to express yourself... :D
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Re: pounding up wordlessly

Post by Doreen Peri » March 26th, 2015, 12:11 pm

Ahhh.... ain't love grand? You lucky man! Loved how you used the senses in this ... tasting words, tasting peace, hearing vision ... Lovely!

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Re: pounding up wordlessly

Post by wylde » March 30th, 2015, 6:35 am

saw wrote:simple and poignant, so exhilarating to imagine the senses, sensing more than they were designed for...like left side and right side brain than can switch if they really need to...there is so much more than verbal communication, but in this case I'm glad you decided to express yourself... :D
saw - your continued seeing is sincerely appreciated. as well as nourishing. thank you. again.

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Re: pounding up wordlessly

Post by wylde » March 30th, 2015, 6:37 am

Doreen Peri wrote:Ahhh.... ain't love grand? You lucky man! Loved how you used the senses in this ... tasting words, tasting peace, hearing vision ... Lovely!
doors - simply; thank you. but you know how heartfelt those 2 small words carry epic proportions.

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