not offering someone close to you
an unobstructed view of their heart
is a sin of omission
'cause lies are not always spoken,
secret chambers may be cool
in eerie spy thrillers, in the house of usher
but in love they are a switchblade
pulled from a thigh-high black boot
and plunged into the stomach
with a cute little twist, it took me
some time to recognize you
mata hari with a wedding ring
and to think how I scrimped
and saved to buy that god damned thing,
all that fucking overtime
the first Mrs. X
Post your poetry, any style.
Re: the first Mrs. X
Post by saw » April 26th, 2015, 8:14 pm
thanx for the thoughtful suggestions Ton...my rough copy has "your", but I changed it for some reason....still processing...and yes ditch the "and"....................will do
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