the first Mrs. X

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saw
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the first Mrs. X

Post by saw » April 25th, 2015, 1:14 pm

not offering someone close to you
an unobstructed view of their heart
is a sin of omission

'cause lies are not always spoken,
secret chambers may be cool
in eerie spy thrillers, in the house of usher

but in love they are a switchblade
pulled from a thigh-high black boot
and plunged into the stomach

with a cute little twist, it took me
some time to recognize you
mata hari with a wedding ring

and to think how I scrimped
and saved to buy that god damned thing,
all that fucking overtime
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

saw
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Joined: May 23rd, 2008, 7:32 am
Location: B'more, Maryland

Re: the first Mrs. X

Post by saw » April 26th, 2015, 8:14 pm

thanx for the thoughtful suggestions Ton...my rough copy has "your", but I changed it for some reason....still processing...and yes ditch the "and"....................will do
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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