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Happy Anniversary, Dear

Post by 68degrees » April 29th, 2015, 3:11 pm

After the feasting, after the laughter carries
far into the night
We have always returned to console ourselves
beneath a cotton blanket, a silk sheet,
our legs like thin leaved branches

It’s worth the risk to grow old and troubled,
both of us scraping the walls of our hearts
Love is worth everything, much like dipping
fingers into nonfat-butter or cleaning a table
of all unnecessary words
Year after year we re-meld, and year after year
the year comes to an end and another begins
Still, a wedding night is never over, rather
it is a late sun spreading over a faded sofa,
a married kiss and the sweetness
of the leftover wedding cake

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Re: Happy Anniversary, Dear

Post by Doreen Peri » April 29th, 2015, 7:50 pm

Stunning poem. Beautiful! Lucky man, lucky lady. LOVE lasting years! Happy Anniversary to you both!

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Re: Happy Anniversary, Dear

Post by judih » April 29th, 2015, 10:29 pm

happy new year, 68degrees. May the celebration continue for many more to come

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Re: Happy Anniversary, Dear

Post by 68degrees » April 30th, 2015, 9:54 am

Probably could use a more original title. It is our 30th anniversary soon, and I needed to get something down on paper.

Thanks for the comments.

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Re: Happy Anniversary, Dear

Post by 68degrees » April 30th, 2015, 2:52 pm

Moose,

Couldn't agree more :)

I "appreciate" the marriage more, I'd say in my case. We have struggled at times, but I was damned I was going to give up. We'll make it now, for sure.

Thanks for your thoughts.

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Re: Happy Anniversary, Dear

Post by saw » May 1st, 2015, 6:20 pm

Happy anniversary...so great to know it's actually possible to still be in love after so many years...a credit to you both....to your resilience...to your communication skills, to your honesty , your forgiveness

bravo !
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Re: Happy Anniversary, Dear

Post by WIREMAN » May 2nd, 2015, 2:54 pm

happy anniversary.....glad u made it.....its about the hardest thing to accomplish in life LOL! some do most don't.....
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: Happy Anniversary, Dear

Post by 68degrees » May 4th, 2015, 11:00 am

Saw / Wireman:

Thanks. True anniversary date not 'til first part of June. But the poem is almost there. Fancy print, parchment paper, the whole shabang.

Hard to live in an age where Romanticism is almost a thing of the past. But I'm still game ;)

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