The Internet and Life Itself

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theirishsea
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The Internet and Life Itself

Post by theirishsea » September 6th, 2015, 8:36 am

back online
amazing how rodents gnaw the imaginary wires
how being in touch with the world
can stop
and there you are Laika, first dog in space
in touch with nobody
all alone
maybe like consciousness itself at the end
adrift
nothing works
no gravity to hold you to this life
wife, sons, daughters strangers then
the United States of America meaningless
God
maybe the one you were taught about
maybe not
pops up in His Glory
or
like a bubble pops
and there you are
traveling through the tunnel of your mind
spit out naked
a baby on a beach
but a baby what ?
or just like a cloud
you dissipate
mere molecules
dumb-inert-inorganic
snipped fingernails
your whole body a fingernail
not you
your mind ?
is it like sleep
a stealthy thief
and you unaware of your loss ?
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.

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the mingo
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Re: The Internet and Life Itself

Post by the mingo » September 6th, 2015, 9:40 am

and there you are Laika, first dog in space

Now that's some kinda Righteous !

... & the rest of the piece too but this line right here had me up & spinning - 8)
What an expression!
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Re: The Internet and Life Itself

Post by mtmynd » September 6th, 2015, 12:27 pm

spent several seconds looking for the "like" button.

i'll do it in the classical style : damn fine read, TIS.
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Re: The Internet and Life Itself

Post by WIREMAN » September 6th, 2015, 2:24 pm

....lovin this one Dan 8)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: The Internet and Life Itself

Post by saw » September 6th, 2015, 5:19 pm

"ground control to major Tom" is what I heard when I read the reference to Laika the space dog....this abandonment one feels when the tether is broken....for whatever reason....and sometimes....it just comes out of the blue
If you do not change your direction
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