Rachel the Radio

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the mingo
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Rachel the Radio

Post by the mingo » September 5th, 2015, 6:23 pm

after her dog died
Rachel wanted
a new face for herself
a new face that looked
just like a radio
her forehead the backlit station dial
with two matching knobs for eyes
and an antenna that
she would make out of
her own heart muscle
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: Rachel the Radio

Post by saw » September 6th, 2015, 5:21 pm

stellar poem ming...I could not only picture the radio, I could picture the heartbreak

really nice !
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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Re: Rachel the Radio

Post by the mingo » September 6th, 2015, 6:32 pm

saw, Thx - I like writing the short ones these days & like it when others can enjoy them too -
Thanks 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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