Awareness marks its debut

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Kailashana
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Awareness marks its debut

Post by Kailashana » September 17th, 2015, 10:53 am

A dark veil descends
envelops everything
swallows the light whole,
nothing escapes.

Stars are born and disappear.

The fractal Earth is seen in
patterns inside patterns,
Art mimics life and life finds
its own way. There are earthquakes
and accidents and tsunami waves.
There is light and sound repeated
everywhere.

There are theories and strings that tie everything
together
to a spider's web. Circles within circles,
patterns within patterns. I've been here
before. I will be again.

Holy books and visions fall onto a sea of glass,
break into new patterns. The cock crows thrice.
It is morning.

I deny nothing.

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Re: Awareness marks its debut

Post by the mingo » September 17th, 2015, 11:27 am

Hell Yeah, Mongolia 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Awareness marks its debut

Post by judih » September 17th, 2015, 9:19 pm

take me there, kailashana

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Re: Awareness marks its debut

Post by Kailashana » September 17th, 2015, 9:23 pm

Can't take you anywhere, Judy, We're already here. :-)

Nice 2cu2.

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Re: Awareness marks its debut

Post by Tjflowers80 » September 18th, 2015, 12:48 am

Hell yeah in general! Amazing work!
And above me the stars align
But not yet with my own
And the night birds sing
Whilst the demon haunts this restless soul.

Jessica Taylor

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Re: Awareness marks its debut

Post by Kailashana » September 18th, 2015, 7:25 am

Hi JT, Nice to meet you.

I've always wondered where thoughts come from. I don't believe in angels or devils, but I'm sure some of them are not my own.

:-)

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Re: Awareness marks its debut

Post by judih » September 18th, 2015, 10:52 am

we have no original thoughts, but sometimes we're lucky enough to notice and remember the good ones that drop in!

<3

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Re: Awareness marks its debut

Post by Kailashana » September 18th, 2015, 11:02 am

Haha. True 'nuff.

However, the way we put together our thoughts, creates our reality. Put all the 7 billion almost 400 million of us and we have the experience of our individual life in tandem with all the others.

Though some would say there are no *others*.

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