Endless

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Tjflowers80
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Endless

Post by Tjflowers80 » September 15th, 2015, 12:35 am

Echoes are reeling
Screams in the night
I'm tired of feeling
I'm tired of the fight.

Too much weighing in
Day after day I try
Heart beating within
Only to see myself cry.

I breathe deeply to become calm
Searching through my storm
Remembering the feel of his arms
Keeping me safe and warm.

But it's only a dream
This I surely know
Nothing is as it seems
There's nothing for it to show.

Eyes open harsh and deft
I'm left alone in my bed
And all that's left
Are the voices in my head.
And above me the stars align
But not yet with my own
And the night birds sing
Whilst the demon haunts this restless soul.

Jessica Taylor

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Re: Endless

Post by saw » September 15th, 2015, 6:27 pm

sometimes we miss things that weren't really there..... :|
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

Tjflowers80
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Re: Endless

Post by Tjflowers80 » September 18th, 2015, 12:56 am

He seems really there and I am sure about him, but then again there are times when I never really know.
And above me the stars align
But not yet with my own
And the night birds sing
Whilst the demon haunts this restless soul.

Jessica Taylor

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Re: Endless

Post by Kailashana » September 18th, 2015, 7:55 am

Amen!

Quite fond of this poem, Jessica. I usually prefer free verse. However this is perfect rhythm and rhyme!

Tjflowers80
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Re: Endless

Post by Tjflowers80 » September 19th, 2015, 12:18 am

Thanks, wish the man would hold still long enough to talk to him.
And above me the stars align
But not yet with my own
And the night birds sing
Whilst the demon haunts this restless soul.

Jessica Taylor

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Re: Endless

Post by dadio » September 22nd, 2015, 2:35 am

Good and enjoyable poem with that uncertainty of life projected. 8)

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Re: Endless

Post by justwalt » September 23rd, 2015, 11:24 pm

don't look now,
your love is showing
:wink:
many is a word

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Re: Endless

Post by Tjflowers80 » September 24th, 2015, 8:12 pm

Not sure if it's my love or just a dream to be honest. But thank you
And above me the stars align
But not yet with my own
And the night birds sing
Whilst the demon haunts this restless soul.

Jessica Taylor

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