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bone on bone

Post by creativesoul » September 19th, 2015, 12:48 pm

the broken part
the heart
the spine was so inclined
to rub the wrong way

electric impulses shorting out
made it hard not to shout
the sky
held still in the waters of the soul
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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Re: bone on bone

Post by WIREMAN » September 19th, 2015, 3:14 pm

Likea likea....everything about this...the length, the sense of wonder in it 8)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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Re: bone on bone

Post by creativesoul » September 19th, 2015, 7:48 pm

Thank you-
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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Re: bone on bone

Post by saw » September 20th, 2015, 5:12 pm

simple truth.... :wink:
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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Re: bone on bone

Post by the mingo » September 21st, 2015, 1:47 am

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: bone on bone

Post by dadio » September 21st, 2015, 7:03 am

Very good. Dostoyevskian in spirit. Love it 8)
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Re: bone on bone

Post by justwalt » September 23rd, 2015, 11:33 pm

smells sexy,
like... wow
many is a word
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Re: bone on bone

Post by creativesoul » September 24th, 2015, 10:28 am

sweet 8)
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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