Carnival

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the mingo
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Carnival

Post by the mingo » November 27th, 2015, 10:51 am

voices swallowed
by music
the whole thing
finally making one sound

i look and watch
but there are
no more leaves
to fall

lights out,
the dark
unbroken
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Carnival

Post by WIREMAN » November 27th, 2015, 3:07 pm

the color brown
bordering on grey
lightening to tan
the hymn silent
now empty
mood tranquil
a time to take
it all in 8)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: Carnival

Post by judih » November 27th, 2015, 11:53 pm

after the leaves
branches test gravity
so much to learn

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the mingo
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Re: Carnival

Post by the mingo » November 29th, 2015, 11:31 am

Thx Wireman & judih 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Carnival

Post by saw » November 29th, 2015, 12:53 pm

fall has fallen
winter looms on tug hill
like the abominable snowman

the wood is stacked
there will be days of hunkering down
and others for snow angels

that sing for the sun queen
may she burn bright
for hikes along the river
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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