Super Bowl Fifty

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leafsailors ghost
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Super Bowl Fifty

Post by leafsailors ghost » February 5th, 2016, 11:49 am

New Rome gladiators in the rattle brain spectacular
entertainment for us God bless Americans
money hungry fat as boss hog
corporate keepers award for good behavior
let the wage slaves party
The cops fan out across the city
clear the homeless camps out
simple relocate the underpass peoples little city
let the mental and poor take care of them
selves some place else
the city needs to be clean for the cameras boys
bullshit

PeteLozano
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Re: Super Bowl Fifty

Post by PeteLozano » February 5th, 2016, 1:28 pm

Heh, I like the ending.

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mnaz
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Re: Super Bowl Fifty

Post by mnaz » February 5th, 2016, 3:11 pm

Well, at least in our Rome, they put in a few rules and referees for our arena violence. Though not so much for all that cage match "ultimate fighting" brutality we've taken to ...

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dadio
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Re: Super Bowl Fifty

Post by dadio » February 6th, 2016, 5:52 pm

Adventurous poem in style and theme 8)

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WIREMAN
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Re: Super Bowl Fifty

Post by WIREMAN » February 7th, 2016, 3:21 pm

....hide the homeless.....funny how i dont remember seeing any when i lived there in santa clara co. back in the late 60's.....there was a big class seperation though, poor on the bay rich in the hills, and middle class inbetween....i wonder what its like theze daze??? after reading the news i fear it hasn't changed much....nice poem and super bowl take 8)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: Super Bowl Fifty

Post by creativesoul » February 11th, 2016, 2:37 am

i dunno- the whole super-butt- thing- the bowl- the $ the rings- the whole machine- spits the football player out of the machine with brain injury and damage


i liked the gladiator ROME thing
the savages
but i liked the rhythm
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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