Real Time #1 Civil War

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leafsailors ghost
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Real Time #1 Civil War

Post by leafsailors ghost » February 9th, 2016, 9:03 am

Civil war
there is no such thing
it is brute murder
still the old song said the angels
were all were flying south
looking back over their shoulders
we did what we could
now the true suffering begins
you bring it on yourselves


Just wrote this poem it was a sentance in my mind , it was a fun and a rewarding experiance

Brian mclaughlin
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Re: Real Time #1 Civil War

Post by Brian mclaughlin » February 9th, 2016, 9:26 am

nothing at all polite about it, nothing at all.
When we speak we are afraid our words will not be heard or welcomed. But when we are silent, we are still afraid. So it is better to speak. ~ Audre Lorde

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dadio
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Re: Real Time #1 Civil War

Post by dadio » February 10th, 2016, 8:12 am

Civil wars are by their very nature more brutal like an interfamily fight where no holds are barred and no quarter given. Neat poem in at the root 8)

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