Write On

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Brian mclaughlin
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Write On

Post by Brian mclaughlin » March 3rd, 2016, 10:21 am

Does poetry really depend on new ideas
fresh words concerning the nature of lives

Haven't the ideas with their words
all been presented

Throughout time, in one form or another
the stories all been told

Do we really think we have created something new
something original
by changing names and places

The expressions used changed
rearranged
and repeated time and again

Then labelled as cliché
as some have recognized the story

There is nothing new

Nothing purely original

It is all cliché to someone

If new and original are the requirements
and it's all been said

Then poetry is dead

Write on
share your heart
and though it's been said
tell your story

Somebody needs to hear it again
When we speak we are afraid our words will not be heard or welcomed. But when we are silent, we are still afraid. So it is better to speak. ~ Audre Lorde

leafsailors ghost
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Re: Write On

Post by leafsailors ghost » March 3rd, 2016, 11:46 am

Exactly sir , words are used over and again, it is the poets mix that tells the story the poet sharesI write exactly what I mean to say in the way that is my natural voice and I respect others willingness to do so also . These are the poets I can get to know and care about their experiences , yes write on , let the poems speak for themselves.

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Re: Write On

Post by judih » March 3rd, 2016, 11:31 pm

no choice
words land on paper
syllables are breath

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