lady discourse

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saw
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lady discourse

Post by saw » March 2nd, 2016, 11:44 am

maybe we can co-exist
perhaps there is room
at the inn for more
than one hard head to find a pillow

perhaps steel traps
can be pried open
with the civility of delicate fingers
a willingness to listen

to tunes never heard before
on AM radio, stories never read
in the backwoods libraries
with no Vonnegut

somehow we need to meet
you and I, in a cafe with strange food
we never heard of, taking a bite
of unimaginable from a menu in Sanskrit

acquiring a taste often lost
in the mule tough stances
of silly traditions passed down through
ignorance repeated like truth

why do we follow tired footprints
why do walk headlong into the swamp
quicksand is nothing but laziness
the dark fens of narrow interpretations
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

leafsailors ghost
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Re: lady discourse

Post by leafsailors ghost » March 3rd, 2016, 11:43 am

Yes I am reading old oriental poets translation hurts it some, but it is still strange and wonderful . We all need alien music and dance , speaking in jazz talk sheebam sam dam trap rap spree free meal seal the deal . The poem opened up my mental pores. A poets conversation when in frendly concert is a wonderful thing.

saw
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Re: lady discourse

Post by saw » March 6th, 2016, 11:22 am

thanx leafsailors g.....appreciate the feedback
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If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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the mingo
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Re: lady discourse

Post by the mingo » March 6th, 2016, 11:47 am

You'll never find toads in the swamps - too many hungry bullfrogs in there - toads do not prefer
being eaten by bullfrogs - i wouldn't want to be ate by a bullfrog either, so i'm with the toads
8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: lady discourse

Post by saw » March 6th, 2016, 11:56 am

Jeremiah is hungrrrrry....
watch your back....eyes on the prize....joy to the world.... 8)
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Re: lady discourse

Post by the mingo » March 6th, 2016, 12:13 pm

8) fuck swamps! snakes - amphibs - bloodsuckers - bugs - yeah, fuck swamps!
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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