It was in the blue of it
it was the vastness of it
it was the dark mystery of it
the midnight rampage of loneliness
sheltered in its faraway light
wrapping around the world in spring sun
winters tempest of power
then the little patch out of the small window
the last quiet room left
not alone
it was the sky of her love
that I felt
always looking over me
always close
Sky
Re: Sky
"It was in the blue of it
it was the vastness of it
it was the dark mystery of it
the midnight rampage of loneliness
sheltered in its faraway light
wrapping around the world in spring sun
winters tempest of power
then the little patch out of the small window
the last quiet room left "
To me (and perhaps only to me;
take this for what it is: random
commentary from an anonymous
blip of light on a screen), the poem
ends gracefully, beautifully,
correctly, there: at "left".
it was the vastness of it
it was the dark mystery of it
the midnight rampage of loneliness
sheltered in its faraway light
wrapping around the world in spring sun
winters tempest of power
then the little patch out of the small window
the last quiet room left "
To me (and perhaps only to me;
take this for what it is: random
commentary from an anonymous
blip of light on a screen), the poem
ends gracefully, beautifully,
correctly, there: at "left".
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Re: Sky
hunted down now to slip away agin good by
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