Superiority

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Brian mclaughlin
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Superiority

Post by Brian mclaughlin » March 28th, 2016, 2:49 pm

Narcissistic superiority
demanding respect
receiving none
as it has not been earned
When we speak we are afraid our words will not be heard or welcomed. But when we are silent, we are still afraid. So it is better to speak. ~ Audre Lorde

leafsailors ghost
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Re: Superiority

Post by leafsailors ghost » March 28th, 2016, 6:09 pm

I wrote a comment at "the other sight" they most likely will not post it. The internet is the whelping grounds for self centered fools, those who I know you are speaking of don't get respect they do get attention You poem nails it but I fear it will fall on deaf ears over yonder .I see you are still in there and much to my surprise I wander back in from time to time, I must laugh because they will edit and post parts of my comments leaving out what they do not like , it makes me laugh ,I got over taking that place seriously I like several of the folk there so I visit enjoyed you well placed statement sir

Brian mclaughlin
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Re: Superiority

Post by Brian mclaughlin » March 28th, 2016, 7:40 pm

at this time, your comment has not been published. it's kin of funny as jeffy was the first to comment and in a sense showed himself to be the perfect example of what the poem was speaking about. ess joined in to comment as to the lack of superiority in the writing of thee piece while using incorrect grammar himself. then lemma showed showed up and he's arguing with the new person coffy.

thanx for stoppin' by
When we speak we are afraid our words will not be heard or welcomed. But when we are silent, we are still afraid. So it is better to speak. ~ Audre Lorde

saw
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Re: Superiority

Post by saw » March 29th, 2016, 6:32 am

to the point without fanfare... :D
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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